I’m currently in Barbados, and it’s impossible not to feel inspired to write here.
Another author told me awhile ago I should write erotic poetry. I had never considered it, but I thought I’d give it a shot. Rebecca T … this one’s for you. Enjoy and stay sexy,
Eden
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Coming at Sea
Foamy white caps
Crash against the beach
She rushes toward it
Chasing it until it recedes into the sea
She jumps the swells
Twisting and throwing her body against the waves
Pushing farther and farther from the shoreline
Swimming furiously toward the vastness
Finally calm and quiet
She bobs like a buoy while removing her bikini
And watches the breaking of waves
Far off in the distance
Floating on her back, she closes her eyes
Allowing the water to embrace her naked body
Wetness beneath her, heat above her
Sandwiched between sea and sky
Push and pull of the ocean
Caresses her breasts exposed to the warm breeze
Gently she touches herself
Stroking the wetness between her legs
The fantasy is exquisite
To have the sea as her lover
Carrying her to the depths of pleasure
Unlike anything she has ever known
As the heat beats down on her
She is invited to open up
To breathe deeper, harder, and to finally feel
The rise and fall of coming at sea








I like this a lot – most instances of eroticism or romance at sea is typically with a partner
Good job for “giving it a shot” :p
Ha! Yes, that’s true. I’m happy you liked it, and tx for making me think about writing it.
Barbados – how fabulous for you! And that is a very lovely poem.
Have a great trip!
Thanks Lisa, glad you like it.
Eden wow..I really like it…Is there anything you can’t do? You are one talented woman…
Savannah, you are too kind, thank you. It’s challenging for me to write poetry, but it was good practice. Appreciate your comment. Eden
Beautiful, Eden…the ocean is amazing in so many ways : )
Eva, thanks so much for your comment. I agree about the ocean. ; )
Very nice poem here. I like that you used the ocean as your lover. Coded and gentle, it lulled me in carefully. Thank you for sharing,
Draven
Lovely comment, thank you Draven
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You are obviously enjoying your time in Barbados.
Hi Stephen! Yes, that was back in April already. It was a lovely trip…in many ways. Really appreciate your commenting here.
eden
Mmm, naked in a Barbadian sea or a cold and wet English winter? Hard choice to make…
PoetJanstie,
How true, wish I was back there. It’s quite cold and wet here in Toronto too.
eden