I haven’t written poetry in awhile, so here’s another attempt at it. My theme this month is “patience,” and it’s a great prompt for an erotic poem, don’t you think?
Hope you enjoy,
eden
“On Top”
I climb on top
Straddle
Your hardness
Between my legs
Palpable
Throbbing
Ready
Lower myself
Anticipate
The push
To copulate
You tease
Make me wait
Frustrate
Swivel hips
Lubricate
Gyrate
Finally
Penetrate
You cradle me
Stroke
Fondle
Play
I grab my breasts
Entice
Pinch
Squeeze
Can’t slow down
Bounce
Thrust
Grind
Can’t wait
Shake
Tremble
Breathless
Can’t stop
Accelerate
Too late
Coming
Convulse
Coming
Ejaculate
Coming
Saturate
Coming
Eventually
Deflate
Breathe
Await
Fill me
Once more
Breathe
Await
Whether poetry or prose, you capture the essence beautifully, Eden.
Jason, thank you for your kind words.
xox
eden
You do have a way with words! I enjoyed!
Thanks honey, xoxo
eden
A seductive sexy delicious treat! Thank you, Eden
Thanks so much Junying. eden
Enjoyed that very much!!
Happy you liked it, and nice to see you here again Mr. N.
eden
Beautiful, the pace matched the action perfectly!
Thanks Gemma, appreciate your comment. It was what I was hoping to accomplish.
eden
Wow….that made me feel….well, it made me feel.
Raisa! Great to see you here, and thanks for feeling
eden
I love this. That’s all I have to say.
Hi Lake, very nice to meet you and thanks for your kind words.
eden
Mmm! No wasted words – the essence of the art of poetry… and of lovemaking.
Ha! John , coming from you – that means SO much. Thank you, thank you.
eden
xox
oh my…
love, Love, LOVE this!
ha.
Great job, my friend!
Lisa
Lisa, thanks honey, so thrilled with your comment!
eden xoxo
Oh, this was lovely to read, Eden!!
Thanks for posting : )
-Eva
Eva, thanks so much!
eden
Smooth slow, the words flowed.
Sexy, enticing, the whole thing excites me.
The moment was well said, and reading it was time well spent.
Love it!
Wow, thank you Orlando for your beautiful comment.
xox
eden
Very hot! Wow! I’ll have to visit here more often. This kind of thing could be a part of spicing up my wife’s and my love life. You have a new follower!
You’re lovely, John. I wish you and your wife much spice!
eden
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