It’s January, the month of “new beginnings,” and I learned something new from a wonderful poet—the word “scansion,” which refers to the rhythm of a line of verse. He also taught me 4-3-4-3 ballad style poetry, so I’ve composed something here in that style. Hope you like it.
eden
“Love Bites”
I’ve typed so much my fingers hurt
Nerve endings start to sting
An odd yet pleasing discomfort
Reminds me of a fling
The only way to stop the pain
Is bite down on each one
Suck the tips ’til feeling’s regained
Then kiss them when he’s done
He scrapes my skin with his sharp teeth
Licks a trail with his tongue
Leaves me burning from deep beneath
A place where it once stung
Connected and so intricate
Is pleasure with my pain
Small bites that inflame and then sate
Resistance is in vain
His oral skills make me shiver
Unleash a lover’s cry
All too soon I feel a quiver
Exhale a drawn-out sigh
Damn woman that is sexy..Love the photo you put with it..Hotness
Thanks Savannah! Happy you liked it
eden
Sexy.
Thanks David, eden
Very sensual! Love the rhythm.
Glad you enjoyed it Glynis,
eden
Please take this as a compliment.
I usually don’t care for erotica. Yet, the way you use tense and atmosphere and the right adjectives makes me enjoy this style – your style- every time.
good writing is good writing, you know, dude?
Ha! You kill me, dude!
I most certainly take your words as a compliment, thank you.
eden
A low rumbling growl would fit with those bites and you would feel a tingle you never had before. And fingertips forgotten.
I loved your poem. Poets can do things mere mortals only dream.
Oh Dannie, I hardly consider myself a poet, but I try. It’s a good way to awaken my mind, especially when I’m feeling sluggish.
Thanks for your comment, eden
aaaahhhhhhh, yes, please.
Hehe, thanks for commenting, Marian. eden
Love the poetress in you, sexy lady. Keep those beautiful words coming and these senses sharp and sensual
Thanks Junying, eden
xox
Fantastic. Love your play with words.
Appreciate your comment Jim, eden
I really like the flow of this poem and it is sexy without saying too much.
Jenny, really appreciate the comment, and thanks for visiting me here.
eden
Yeah, Love the flow and makes me want to go out there and bite someone.
Ha! Mark, thank you, please make sure not to bite too hard.
eden
My word, your poetry gets better and better, M’am!
Thank you John, I really appreciate that. I have a remarkable teacher.
eden
Nice! Like it lots.
Thanks May, appreciate the comment.
eden
Chills once more! Great rhyming scheme. Might try it myself.
Melpomene, thanks for your comment. Please do!
eden
Quite the poem to read on a Sunday afternoon. Enjoy your style.
Sid, thanks very much for your comment. Appreciate your taking the time to write me.
eden
Well done.
Thanks JB for your comment, eden
Eden, it’s not easy to make rhyme and meter so sexy. But the scrape of teeth, the seesaw of pleasure and pain…
Thanks Bianca, happy you liked it.
eden
Is it just me, or is that poem extra steamy?
Hehe, thanks William. I’ll take that as a compliment
eden
Sexy! Great poem!
Larry, thanks very much for reading.
eden